Final Draft Assessment

Final Draft – Opening Sequence
Self-Assessment:
Record of Grade:	we got a 4a in our opening sequence which is a 'A'. It was out of 60 marks and we got 58/60.
Targets to improve:	if we had one more chance to improve it we would make sure the main characters nail varnish was continous and also include another eye-line match of when she was looking down on the paper after her possession was done.
Teacher Assessment:
Peer Assessment:
Any additional drafts:	N/A

Final Draft- Our Group Grade and Mark

Group Mark	58/60
Group Level	4A
Individual Mark	58/60
Individual Level	4A

Here is our Final Draft Opening Sequence! We got graded a 4a which is a 'A' grade and the total marks we got was 58/60.

Meeting Up As A Group

DATE	TIME	PEOPLE ATTENDED	AGENDA (points to discuss)	TARGETS (outcome of meeting)	DUE DATE/DEADLINE
4/01/12	12:00- 19:00	Me and Kaya	Need to meet up to do our assignment 11	Finish assignment 11	5/01/12- 10/01/12
5/01/12	12:00- 19:00	Me and Kaya	Need to finish assignment 11	finish assignment 11	6/01/12- 10/01/12
6/01/12	12:00- 19:00	Me and Kaya	Need to finish assignment 11	Finish assignment 11	7/01/12- 10/01/12
7/01/12	12:00- 19:00	Me and Kaya	Need to finish assignment 11	Finished assignment 11	8/01/12- 10/01/12
02/03/12	3:20-16:30	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	Planning what we need to do for our preliminary task	Filming the preliminary and then uploading it to edit it by Wednesday	05/03/12- 07/03/12
17/03/12 18/03/12	3:30-5:30	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	First time filming for opening sequence draft 1	Need to start editing and get feedback from our teacher	19/03/12 21/03/12
24/03/12	3:30-17:30	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	Need to film for draft 2	Finished editing for draft 2 until 28/03/12 and then receive feedback from teacher	26/03/12-28/03/12
30/04/12	12:00-19:00	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	Begin filming for draft 3	Need to edit on the 9/03/03 to meet deadline for Wednesday 11/03/11	1/03/12- 11/03/11
23/03/12	10:40-17:30	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	Need to edit for draft 4	Edit as much as possible for draft 4 by Wednesday	23/0312- 25/03/12
27/04/12	10:00-19:30	Me Kaya Rahel Gia	Need to film on for final draft	Filmed all footage on Saturday	28/04/12 – 2/04/12
29/04/12	13:00-16:30	Me and Kaya	Redid some filming again as mistakes were made	Need to edit for this final draft	2/04/12

What I learnt In Lesson

In lesson today miss had taught us what makes a good film/opening sequence if we included such filming techniques such as eye-line match, match on action and good continuity. Eye-line match is used for when a character is staring at something and you can see what that person is seeing, for example when someone stares at a television. This is so the audience can know what the character is staring at. I never knew what this was and it was interesting to know that I included this eye-line match in our opening sequence.

Also we got told what a 180 degree rule was and how we are not allowed to cross over the 180 degree rule. This rule is crucial and if we broke the 180 degree rule then it would confuse the audience and ruin the whole film for example when two people are talking character A is on the right and character B is on the left and if you broker the rule and character A was on the left and Character B is on the right then the audience would want to how the characters changed side.

One more thing our teacher taught us was continuity and having continuity throughout your film or opening sequence would create a nice flow for the audience. Continuity is consistency of the characteristics of persons, plot, objects, places and events seen by the reader or viewer over some period of time. Unfortunetly youtube wouldn't let me embed this clip so instead here is the link to what my teacher has showed me of what a eye-line match, 180 degree rule and continuity is.. .

180 degree rule Continuity

Eye- Line Match