Title: Match on Action
Incorrect description and more visuals
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- More description and more images included to show examples.
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Overhead plans
Draft 1
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Draft 2
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Not accurate plan of room
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- Now our plan of the room is accurate
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Script
Draft 1
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Draft 2
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- Shot numbers are missing and no commentary included.
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-Shot number are now included as well as the commentary.
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Storyboard
Draft 1
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Draft 2
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- Boxes weren’t the same side and shot number weren’t included.
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-Box is now the same size and shot number has been added.
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Shot list
Draft 1
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Draft 2
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- We had not enough shots and we didn’t included the shot numbers
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- We added in more shots and shot numbers were included.
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