Friday, 11 May 2012

Mark Adjustment

Miss moderated our work again, so our grade has been lowered by 1 mark,
so now have 57/60

Mine and my group target grade


Gia Alveranga
C1
(67 m)
53 (88% A2)
52 (86% A2)
Kaya Sumbland
B3
(70 m)
58 (96% A1)
57 (95% A1)
Sanel Homer
C3
(60 m)
58 (96% A1)
57 (95% A1)
Rahel Fasir
B1
(77 m)
58 (96% A1)
57 (95% A1)

Friday, 4 May 2012

Target Audience Feedback For Our Final Draft

We asked some of our target audience some questions to do with our final piece of our opening sequence. The age range was 15 to 18. Here is a video of what they thought about it.

What I learnt throughout the year!

Here is a video of me talking about what I have learnt throughout the year from filming the pleminiary task to our first draft to our final!

Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Final Draft Assessment



Final Draft – Opening Sequence
Self-Assessment:
Record of Grade:
we got a 4a in our opening sequence which is a 'A'. It was out of 60 marks and we got 58/60.
Targets to improve:
if we had one more chance to improve it we would make sure the main characters nail varnish was continous and also include another eye-line match of when she was looking down on the paper after her possession was done.
Teacher Assessment:
 
Peer Assessment:
Any additional drafts:
N/A

Final Draft- Our Group Grade and Mark


Group Mark
58/60
Group Level
4A
Individual Mark
58/60
Individual Level
4A
Here is our Final Draft Opening Sequence! We got graded a 4a which is a 'A' grade and the total marks we got was 58/60.