Draft 4 – Opening Sequence
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Self-Assessment:
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Record of Grade:
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In this opening sequence we got a 3b |
Targets to improve:
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next time include different variety of shots such as when she is lighting the candle we could have added a close-up shot of her lighting them up and a point of view shot when she looks at the cupboard. |
Teacher Assessment:
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Peer Assessment:
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Any additional drafts:
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