Peer Assessment

Assignment 9/11 - Change in drafts

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
-Not being specific enough should expand into more details. -Need examples to prove point.	- Research a lot to do with thriller.	- More research was added to be a ‘psycho thriller’ and differences between

TITLE: PART O; Target audience

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
-Should include images of our target audience.	-Target audience feedback was not included.	Now target audience is included

TITLE: PART L; Inspirational films

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
Needed better visuals Need to explain a lot more	Had good images but needed to use PEE structure.	More inspirational films with better visuals to match

TITLE: PART R; Narrative

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
Need more explanation And research more on the narrative	- Good details  but need to add visual to explain better	Narrative was explained to suit the new idea

TITLE: PART S; Film theory

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
Need to add more information as it was too basic.	Still basic, need to add more explanation.	explanation has expand

TITLE: PART Q; Locations

DRAF T 1	DRAFT 2	DRAFT 3
-Change the school location - Need to add a few more health and safety issues - Need more images of location	Had better health and safety information and more images were included.

Assignment 11: Group presentation draft 3 PART 1

Assigment 11 part 1

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Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 4!

Today Kaya and I met up again to do assignment 11. Rahel and Gia again haven't come. We looked and talked about what credits/titles, music and sounds we wanted to use in our opening sequence and film, however we had problems with that as we couldn't create our own music as we don't have a mac, so we're going to do it tomorrow at school. Also we had problems with titles/credits as we don't have iMovie, so we are going to find out tomorrow if what we have done today is possible to make with iMovie!
Here is a picture of us working together !

Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 3!

Today Kaya and myself met up again as we still need to work on our assignment. Gia and Rahel haven't contacted us on meeting up so they weren't here again, but we have learnt a lot today and made a lot of progress on the assignment. We fully developed the characters, locations, enigma and target audience.
Today, I had to dressed myself in character by changing the look of my face by using make-up, but we don't yet have her costume, however we worked with the costume that was similar to what we wanted the character to look like and we took pictures for our assigment. We couldn't do characters for Rahel and Gia as they didn't come to the meet up, so hopefully they will come tomorrow so we can get them in costume and make-up.
Here is a picture of me in hair, makeup and costume!!

Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 2!

Today Kaya and I met up to take pictures of our location. We travelled all the way to Golders Green to take pictures of the journey our character will we walking! After we went to Kaya's house to carry on doing the assignment. Gia also met up for an hour but Rahel however could not meet up as she had to pick her brother up from school. Nevertheless Kaya and I got through a lot of the presentation doing the script, conventions, and analysed a few opening sequences from other drama films and looking at how they created enigma!
Here is a picture of the park we are going to!

Meet up for Assignment 11 - Day 1: What we've learnt

Today me and Kaya have met up on assignment 11 and this video is just us discussing what we've learnt today and the progress we've made!