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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Not being specific enough should expand into more details.
-Need examples to prove point.
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- Research a lot to do with thriller.
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- More research
was added to be a ‘psycho thriller’ and differences between
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TITLE: PART O; Target audience
DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Should include images of our target audience.
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-Target audience feedback was not included.
| Now target audience is included |
TITLE: PART L; Inspirational films
DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Needed better visuals
Need to explain a lot more
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Had good images but needed to use PEE structure.
| More inspirational films with better visuals to match |
TITLE: PART R; Narrative
DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Need more explanation
And research more on the narrative
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- Good details but need to add visual to explain better
| Narrative was explained to suit the new idea |
TITLE: PART S; Film theory
DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Need to add more information as it was too basic.
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Still basic, need to add more explanation.
| explanation has expand |
TITLE: PART Q; Locations
DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Change the school location
- Need to add a few more health and safety issues
- Need more images of location
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Had better health and safety information and more images were included.
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