Wednesday 25 January 2012

Assignment 14: Group Preliminary Presentation

ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _14__: Group Preliminary Presentation
Self-Assessment:        

In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good organisation
-Good brainstorm ideas
-Good images on camera shots and angles and how we use it
-Good dialogue on script

In this assignment it would be EBI if...

-Make sure that we redo match on action slide and make sure it makes sense
-Also include variety of examples for match on action
-Add shot numbers and commentary to the script and storyboard
-Change the over view idea completely
-Make changes to storyboard
Record of Grade:        
In this assignment I would have graded our group a D because our work was incomplete as we didn't plan our time right to get this presentation done. However our actual grade was also a D. We missed a few important things such as including shot numbers on the storyboard and script. Also the script was half done as we didn't include the commentary for the first scene. Since we were in a hurry to complete this presentation we also didn't make sense when trying to explain what match on action is.
Targets to improve:    
Next time as a group we shall organise our planning days to get our work done before doing last minute incomplete work such as the storyboard and script. Also have a better understanding of match and action is and so next time we should also include examples to understand the shot and so we can have a clear idea of it when applying it our preliminary task.
Teacher Assessment: 
Peer Assessment: 
N/A.
Any additional drafts: 
N/A.

Tuesday 24 January 2012

Assignment 13: Filming Jobs Task

ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _13__: Filming Jobs Task
Self-Assessment:        

In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good Organisation of presentation layout
-Good images
-Good description of job
-Good examples of being an Art Director
-Good points on how to be successful

In this assignment it would be EBI if...
-Expand more on description of being a Cameraman
-Add more information to the description of the cameraman job
-Add more images and more text
Record of Grade:        
In this assignment I would have graded our group a C because we have a well presented layout and good images to match our points. We have a good idea's on how to make sure we become successful at our jobs and also finding and knowing information on what each job does.
Targets to improve:    
Next time to improve my part of the presentation I should add more information of being a cameraman and to research more about what the cameraman job does.
Teacher Assessment: 

N/A.
Peer Assessment: 
N/A.
Any additional drafts: 
N/A.

Thursday 19 January 2012

ASSIGNMENT 12: PRELIMINARY RESEARCH TASK

ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _12__: PRELIMINARY RESEARCH TASK
Self-Assessment:        

In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good organisation
-brief points
-Good images
-Writing the key terms
-Giving poor preliminary task different shots they could have used

In this assignment it would be EBI if...
-Make sure that we redo match on action slide and make sure it makes sense
-Add more images
-Analyse the diagram better
-Add more reason to why the poor preliminary was unsuccessful
-Add more reason to why I gave the poor preliminary a level 2
Record of Grade:        
In this assignment I would have graded myself a D because I should have included more shots for the poor preliminary task and to write a few more reasons why I given them a level 2. 
Targets to improve:    
To make sure I analyse the pictures better and also to write more on why you graded them those level. Add more images to each slide when showing the shots as your analysing what went well and what went wrong.
Teacher Assessment: 

N/A.
Peer Assessment: 
N/A.
Any additional drafts: 
N/A.

Tuesday 10 January 2012

Assignment 11: Group presentation draft 3

Peer Assessment

Assignment 9/11 - Change in drafts



DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
-Not being specific enough should expand into more details.

-Need examples to prove point.
- Research a lot to do with thriller.
- More research was added to be a ‘psycho thriller’ and differences between



TITLE: PART O; Target audience

DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
-Should include images of our target audience.
-Target audience feedback was not included.
Now target audience is included



TITLE: PART L; Inspirational films

DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
Needed better visuals
Need to explain a lot more
Had good images but needed to use PEE structure.
More inspirational films with better visuals to match



TITLE: PART R; Narrative

DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
Need more explanation
And research more on the narrative
- Good details  but need to add visual to explain better
 Narrative was explained to suit the new idea


TITLE: PART S; Film theory

DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
Need to add more information as it was too basic.
Still basic, need to add more explanation.
explanation has expand



TITLE: PART Q; Locations

DRAF T 1
DRAFT 2
DRAFT 3
-Change the school location
- Need to add a few more health and safety issues
- Need more images of location
Had better health and safety information and more images were included.


Assignment 11: Group presentation draft 3 PART 1

Sunday 8 January 2012

Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 4!

Today Kaya and I met up again to do assignment 11. Rahel and Gia again haven't come. We looked and talked about what credits/titles, music and sounds we wanted to use in our opening sequence and film, however we had problems with that as we couldn't create our own music as we don't have a mac, so we're going to do it tomorrow at school. Also we had problems with titles/credits as we don't have iMovie, so we are going to find out tomorrow if what we have done today is possible to make with iMovie!
Here is a picture of us working together !

Saturday 7 January 2012

Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 3!

Today Kaya and myself met up again as we still need to work on our assignment. Gia and Rahel haven't contacted us on meeting up so they weren't here again, but we have learnt a lot today and made a lot of progress on the assignment. We fully developed the characters, locations, enigma and target audience.
Today, I had to dressed myself in character by changing the look of my face by using make-up, but we don't yet have her costume, however we worked with the costume that was similar to what we wanted the character to look like and we took pictures for our assigment. We couldn't do characters for Rahel and Gia as they didn't come to the meet up, so hopefully they will come tomorrow so we can get them in costume and make-up.
Here is a picture of me in hair, makeup and costume!!

Friday 6 January 2012

Meet up for Assignment 11 : Day 2!

Today Kaya and I met up to take pictures of our location. We travelled all the way to Golders Green to take pictures of the journey our character will we walking! After we went to Kaya's house to carry on doing the assignment. Gia also met up for an hour but Rahel however could not meet up as she had to pick her brother up from school. Nevertheless Kaya and I got through a lot of the presentation doing the script, conventions, and analysed a few opening sequences from other drama films and looking at how they created enigma!
Here is a picture of the park we are going to!

Thursday 5 January 2012

Meet up for Assignment 11 - Day 1: What we've learnt

Today me and Kaya have met up on assignment 11 and this video is just us discussing what we've learnt today and the progress we've made!