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ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _14__: Group Preliminary Presentation
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Self-Assessment:
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In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good organisation -Good brainstorm ideas -Good images on camera shots and angles and how we use it -Good dialogue on script In this assignment it would be EBI if... -Make sure that we redo match on action slide and make sure it makes sense -Also include variety of examples for match on action -Add shot numbers and commentary to the script and storyboard -Change the over view idea completely -Make changes to storyboard |
Record of Grade:
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In this assignment I would have graded our group a D because our work was incomplete as we didn't plan our time right to get this presentation done. However our actual grade was also a D. We missed a few important things such as including shot numbers on the storyboard and script. Also the script was half done as we didn't include the commentary for the first scene. Since we were in a hurry to complete this presentation we also didn't make sense when trying to explain what match on action is.
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Targets to improve:
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Next time as a group we shall organise our planning days to get our work done before doing last minute incomplete work such as the storyboard and script. Also have a better understanding of match and action is and so next time we should also include examples to understand the shot and so we can have a clear idea of it when applying it our preliminary task.
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ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _13__: Filming Jobs Task
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Self-Assessment:
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In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good Organisation of presentation layout -Good images -Good description of job -Good examples of being an Art Director -Good points on how to be successful In this assignment it would be EBI if... -Expand more on description of being a Cameraman -Add more information to the description of the cameraman job -Add more images and more text |
Record of Grade:
| In this assignment I would have graded our group a C because we have a well presented layout and good images to match our points. We have a good idea's on how to make sure we become successful at our jobs and also finding and knowing information on what each job does. |
Targets to improve:
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Next time to improve my part of the presentation I should add more information of being a cameraman and to research more about what the cameraman job does.
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ASSESMENT OF ASSIGNMENT _12__: PRELIMINARY RESEARCH TASK
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Self-Assessment:
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In this assignment, I think WWW was...
-Good organisation -brief points -Good images -Writing the key terms -Giving poor preliminary task different shots they could have used In this assignment it would be EBI if... -Make sure that we redo match on action slide and make sure it makes sense -Add more images -Analyse the diagram better -Add more reason to why the poor preliminary was unsuccessful -Add more reason to why I gave the poor preliminary a level 2 |
Record of Grade:
| In this assignment I would have graded myself a D because I should have included more shots for the poor preliminary task and to write a few more reasons why I given them a level 2. |
Targets to improve:
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To make sure I analyse the pictures better and also to write more on why you graded them those level. Add more images to each slide when showing the shots as your analysing what went well and what went wrong.
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DRAF T 1
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Not being specific enough should expand into more details.
-Need examples to prove point.
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- Research a lot to do with thriller.
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- More research
was added to be a ‘psycho thriller’ and differences between
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Should include images of our target audience.
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-Target audience feedback was not included.
| Now target audience is included |
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Needed better visuals
Need to explain a lot more
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Had good images but needed to use PEE structure.
| More inspirational films with better visuals to match |
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Need more explanation
And research more on the narrative
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- Good details but need to add visual to explain better
| Narrative was explained to suit the new idea |
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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Need to add more information as it was too basic.
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Still basic, need to add more explanation.
| explanation has expand |
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DRAFT 2
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DRAFT 3
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-Change the school location
- Need to add a few more health and safety issues
- Need more images of location
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Had better health and safety information and more images were included.
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